Thursday, November 25, 2010

Poetic Start

This is the first poetry I wrote for someone who got so close to me that I lost him never to find him again.


When i peek a glance down the memory lane,
a refreshing story gets to life again.

Two men with completely different character
decided to ink an indelible chapter,
A story of friendship trust n bonding
That will spark till the end of the ending;
sans any vices that can spoil the nices
in a world where relations r like spices.

So writing an encomium about an introvert person,
life of whom is like dat calm still surface
encasing so many torbulence under the sun.

A face as serene to a blind man's perception,
A heart simpler than additiion n subtraction.

A angelic smile coming from those ruddy lips every morning
lightens up the day for somethng exiciting.

Eyes that mirror the pristinity of the soul
A strong mind rock-steady on two able shoulders
not allowing the vision to get out of the goal

Patience finds here the perfect shelter
Humility respect make him more nobler.
So guys n gals beware,
the shear poetry of his character
will catch u unaware.

4 comments:

  1. It's wonderful that you started dabbling in poetry too. Now you and Udi, two poets are in Chem-30.
    Welcome Baba- the poet ...

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  2. Thnx u 4 ur appreciation...still a novice.
    i ve 2 read a lot to write wid more maturity ..ne suggestions ??

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  3. I'm sorry, but I'm too naive to suggest anything about poetry. Udi and others might suggest you something.

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  4. CT..u r too wise to b naive..may be not as a expert..but as a reader 4 sure..:)

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